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:iconearthsmiles:
What a lovely photograph! How can you help but smile when you see it?

The use of black and white is perfection. I love the highlights on the face and the sheen on the hair. The hand resting on the shoulder with the fingers protruding from the sleeve adds a nice complement to the striped wall in the background.

The lens distortion at close range only adds to the charm of the photo!

My only quibble is the dark object in the background behind the model's left shoulder. This is something I must constantly remind myself--always check the background for distracting elements! But truly, it's only a small element in an otherwise perfect--and thoroughly delightful-- image!

You have a marvelous eye for using the light, playing to the camera, and expressing emotion. I realize you are young, but as your education progresses I do hope you consider a career in marketing. Obviously you can do modeling and photography, but I would not be surprised to see the title of "Art Director" behind your name some day!

With best regards,
EarthSmiles
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:iconvillybilly:
I like it! U look nice in here :)
:iconslinky-2012:
Gorgeous shot, beautiful model :)
Well done!

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:iconzen1965:
Great shot!Like the lighting especially,the way it throws a shadow!Well done!

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:iconmuffin-in-a-coffin:
i like it. the background is great! and i like your pose and the look on your face. the only thing i don't like much is the high contrast what makes your face so white.
:iconczekerap:
you are so pretty and you have very nice lips ! :D
:iconby-c:
wauw.

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:iconcheryl-lee:
Really beautiful shot, great lighting and compostion.
The wall give it a nice texture aswell.
:iconthepassengerx:
beautiful color and the lightninh is awesome :worship: :love:

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